Watters writes skillfully. His tone is measured, but you can see Watters struggling for a consistent voice and style. Is this lay scholarship (the nearly three dozen pages of sources are impressive) or first person travelogue? The “I’’ wavers in and out. Zanzibar is the most personal section. Sri Lanka feels the most distant, seemingly reported largely from library research and phone conversations; the section could have benefited from in-country reporting and more follow-up now that five years have passed since the tsunami. One could criticize the inconsistent methodology, or see the various approaches as creative tacks into a tricky subject matter.
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